It's pretty good, but it needs a good bit of editing.
Here, let me do that, and I'll post it here.
Hang on.
*
Alright.
Finished.
It's called "A Savior's History",
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The six shall meet,
A surprising feat,
And they quickly learned about one another.
The new teammates train,
And practice their aim,
To care and help their brothers.
The leader fights his foes,
And his strength continues to grow,
As he learns to protect his people.
The team’s victories grow in numbers,
Always dodging their enemy’s gunners,
Making everyday never dull.
As their final battle loomed,
The hearts of the citizens filled with doom,
For they feared for their heroes’ lives.
They need not have made their worry,
Because in an act of blind fury,
Their enemy could not have survived.
The war had ended,
And with their wounds mended,
The team left in peace.
With a promise to return,
And with a swear to learn,
The violence of the universe soon ceased.
And it’s all thanks to the Hyperforce.
A surprising feat,
And they quickly learned about one another.
The new teammates train,
And practice their aim,
To care and help their brothers.
The leader fights his foes,
And his strength continues to grow,
As he learns to protect his people.
The team’s victories grow in numbers,
Always dodging their enemy’s gunners,
Making everyday never dull.
As their final battle loomed,
The hearts of the citizens filled with doom,
For they feared for their heroes’ lives.
They need not have made their worry,
Because in an act of blind fury,
Their enemy could not have survived.
The war had ended,
And with their wounds mended,
The team left in peace.
With a promise to return,
And with a swear to learn,
The violence of the universe soon ceased.
And it’s all thanks to the Hyperforce.
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